This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda
She was repulsed the first time she saw him.
With time, the repulsion turned into attraction, culminating in love.
Infatuation soon became obsession, clinging too tight, too afraid to lose.
So when the bumble-bee abandoned this flower to suck at the next, depression and desperation ravaged the poor soul.
Again though, with time the only emotion that remained was indifference on seeing him after some years.
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda
Good attempt! 🙂
Arvind Passey
http://www.passey.info
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Thanks Arvind… Just wrote on the fly
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WoW! A beautifully constructed roller-coaster of emotions!!
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Thank you 🙂
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Awwww 🙂 sad but very cute!
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Thank you dear!
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very well written
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Thank you so much Cifar.
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Very interesting. This format forces you to condense your thoughts using very few words!
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Hope those few words bring out the essence.
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Nicely written 🙂
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Thanks Nikhil 🙂
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Yamini, I’m amazed how feelings change over time. Beautifully captured:)
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Its not for nothing that they say “Time is a great healer,” isn’t it? With time things change in a way we can never even imagine they would. Thanks for stopping by Vishal.
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🙂
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Sad Parable of time. Aptly penned the truth of how the once-love turns into indifference.
Cheers!!!
Silly Smiles… Take you Miles 🙂
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the metamorphosis of the feelings is each line is well crafted.
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*takes a bow* Thanks Kalpana 🙂
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beautifully crafted story with minimal use of words.
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